RME-232 · Don't be Sally · elements first
Everything the Black Friday series needs, counted once
All twelve ideas from the Don't be Sally series , gone through scene by scene. Every person,
prop, place, floor and movement is listed once, with how many videos use it and whether it is already drawn. The look is the 2.5D cut-out:
the white sticker outline, brand colours, egg people, floors that change per scene. Library first, so nothing already drawn gets drawn again.
Your job here Look at: the counts , then the build order (44 pieces, most reused first). Vy: tap Vy could draw at the top of the master list to see the floors, people and props you could design.Skip: the finish of the small pictures. They are pieces already in the library, shown so you can see what exists.Your choice: is this the right list to build from . Then Claude builds one piece at a time and you confirm each.The counts
8 people 5 already in the egg cast, 3 new, plus crowds
43 props objects and hung pieces
10 places the scenes, from 148 storyboard frames
6 floors plus 3 backdrops
35 movements 19 for people, 16 for things
60 already drawn library, egg rig or waiting on a yes
12 to redraw old look, needs the cut-out look
34 new not drawn anywhere yet
8 people, 43 props, 10 scenes, 6 floors, 35 movements, 60 already drawn, 12 to redraw, 34 new. Vy could draw 22 of them.
The build order, one piece at a time
Only the pieces still to draw, most reused first, so the first few you confirm unlock the most videos. A move comes straight after
the piece it moves. Places are assembled last, from their floor, backdrop and props. Claude builds a piece, you confirm it, then the next.
BF-O39 The Don't be Sally end cardDrawn, waiting on YT's yes in 12 of 12 · Claude. BF-K04 Envelopes stack and pile upNew in 9 of 12 · Claude. BF-O18 Chart marksNew in 8 of 12 · Claude. BF-O17 Month wall and month stripNeeds redrawing in 7 of 12 · Claude. BF-O16 StaircaseNeeds redrawing in 7 of 12 · Claude. BF-O15 Sending lineNeeds redrawing in 4 of 12 · Claude. BF-K12 Charts draw and climbNeeds redrawing in 9 of 12 · Claude. Right after BF-O15, so you see the piece first. BF-O19 Running meterNeeds redrawing in 4 of 12 · Claude. BF-O26 The amber spam flagNew Vy in 4 of 12 · Claude. BF-R18 Raise the spam flagNew in 3 of 12 · Claude. Right after BF-O26, so you see the piece first. BF-K06 The gate narrows and holds the extraNew in 4 of 12 · Claude. BF-P06 The one who forgot and pressed spamNew Vy in 4 of 12 · Vy designs. BF-K08 Dots change colour, pour in, drop outNeeds redrawing in 3 of 12 · Claude. BF-B03 Christmas dining room wallNew Vy in 2 of 12 · Vy could design. BF-F06 A dining room for Christmas dinnerNew Vy in 2 of 12 · Vy could design. BF-O32 Long dinner tableNew Vy in 2 of 12 · Claude. BF-K10 Chairs change colour and fold awayNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. Right after BF-O32, so you see the piece first. BF-P08 The steady senderNew Vy in 2 of 12 · Vy designs. BF-O20 Case file with a 2022 tabNeeds redrawing in 2 of 12 · Claude. BF-O21 Four badgesNeeds redrawing in 2 of 12 · Claude. BF-K15 RewindNew in 2 of 12 · Claude. BF-O27 Suppression barNew in 2 of 12 · Claude. BF-O40 Series markNew in 2 of 12 · Claude. BF-O35 Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tagNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-K11 A sticker slaps on, then peels offNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. Right after BF-O35, so you see the piece first. BF-F05 The start lineNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Vy could design. BF-K05 Envelopes queue and drain at the deskNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O36 Law-office signNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O29 Stretch matNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-R17 StretchNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. Right after BF-O29, so you see the piece first. BF-O22 Out of every 100Needs redrawing in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O30 Social post cardNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O31 Clock faceNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O37 Calendar square with a pickleNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-P07 The stranger from the raffleNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Vy designs. BF-R19 Carry a boxNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O23 Dot fractionNeeds redrawing in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O24 Parcel tag reading 421Needs redrawing in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O28 The SEND buttonNeeds redrawing in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-H03 Autumn leaves on stringsNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-K16 The season tint warmsNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. Right after BF-H03, so you see the piece first. BF-O33 Raffle ticket and question markNew Vy in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O34 Blame arrowNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. BF-O38 Small teal heartNew in 1 of 12 · Claude. The master list
All
Vy could draw
New
To redraw
Already drawn
People 8 Who is in the series. Looks wait on Vy's cast pick.
BF-P01
Sally Send, the sender In the egg rig Vy could draw
Runs Coral Cove Coffee and sends to everyone, all the time. In every video.
In 12 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
From: egg cast role 1 (egg-cast.html), M-11 name card
Who: Vy picks the look
The egg cast already has her as role 1 with three look options. Her final look waits on Vy's cast pick (RME-136). In the cut-out look she is the person, not the name card.
BF-P02
The loyal subscriber In the egg rig Vy could draw
The teal readers who want the email: they open, they come to dinner, they set off first.
In 7 of 12: 2 3 4 6 8 10 12
From: egg cast role 2
Who: Vy picks the look
BF-P03
The quiet one In the egg rig Vy could draw
Readers who drift off and fade to grey: the old friends she has not called in years.
In 5 of 12: 2 3 4 6 7
From: egg cast role 4
Who: Vy picks the look
BF-P04
The one who moved on In the egg rig Vy could draw
Old addresses nobody reads any more. The invite bounces back.
In 2 of 12: 6 7
From: egg cast role 5
Who: Vy picks the look
BF-P05
The one who left In the egg rig Vy could draw
Said stop. Steps out through a door and the door closes.
In 3 of 12: 2 6 7
From: egg cast role 6
Who: Vy picks the look
Not drawn yet
BF-P06
The one who forgot and pressed spam New Vy could draw
Does not remember signing up, so raises the amber spam flag.
In 4 of 12: 2 3 6 7
Who: Vy designs
Not in the egg cast yet. Four videos need this person, more than any other new role.
Not drawn yet
BF-P07
The stranger from the raffle New Vy could draw
Met Sally once at her free coffee raffle and got added anyway. Holds a raffle ticket.
In 1 of 12: 7
Who: Vy designs
Not in the egg cast. Could be one of the crowd with a raffle ticket and a question mark, instead of a full role.
Not drawn yet
BF-P08
The steady sender New Vy could draw
Sally's calm opposite: sends to a rhythm and takes the stairs, not the lift.
In 2 of 12: 5 9
Who: Vy designs
Not in the egg cast. The storyboards draw this as a calm line. In the cut-out look it needs a person beside Sally.
Extras 1 Everyone else, made by the egg crowd maker.
BF-X01
Crowd extras In the egg rig
Webinar viewers, readers on the street, dinner guests. As many as a scene needs.
In 6 of 12: 2 4 5 7 10 12
From: egg crowd maker and crowd codes (wire-looks.js)
No drawing needed: the egg generator makes any crowd and a crowd code rebuilds it exactly. For big numbers (400 viewers, 100 guests) the dot stands in.
Props and objects 40 Everything people hold, stand by or watch.
BF-O01
Envelope In the library
One email. Flies, lands, stacks, bounces back.
In 11 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 10 11 12
From: D-243 (from M-12)
BF-O02
A reader as a dot In the library
One address. Big lists are a grid of dots that turn grey, rose or amber.
In 6 of 12: 2 3 5 6 10 12
From: D-254 (from M-25), the dot grid redraw D-297 is in RME-229 batch 1
BF-O03
The gate In the library
Where the provider lets mail through. It narrows when volume jumps. Also the tool checkpoint on the road.
In 8 of 12: 1 3 4 5 6 9 10 11
From: D-245 (from M-18)
BF-O04
Reader's door and the street of doors In the library
Where a reader lives. Opens, or shuts for good when they leave.
In 6 of 12: 2 4 6 7 10 12
From: D-246 (from M-14), the doors street redraw D-294 is in RME-229 batch 1
BF-O05
The mail server desk In the library
The mailbox provider (the one Sally writes to in capitals). No face, a small screen.
In 4 of 12: 3 4 8 10
From: D-247 (from M-13)
BF-O06
The junk tray In the library
Where part of the stream drops when it misses the inbox.
In 3 of 12: 3 4 6
From: D-250 (from M-18, M-37)
BF-O07
List board In the library
Sally's list, and her second list in idea 2.
In 2 of 12: 2 10
From: D-255
BF-O08
Sign on a stand In the library
The try-again-later sign that flips up on the desk.
In 1 of 12: 8
From: D-249
Same sign, new words on it.
BF-O09
Office desk with a screen In the library
Sally's desk, where she writes and sends.
In 1 of 12: 2
From: D-267 (floor prop)
BF-O10
Coffee cup In the egg rig
Sally's cup, beside her where the business helps the joke.
In 4 of 12: 1 5 10 12
From: egg rig hand prop: cup
BF-O11
Coffee subscription box In the egg rig
Her small brown box. The same boxes become the moving boxes in idea 6.
In 4 of 12: 5 6 8 10
From: egg rig hand prop: box, M-06 storage unit
Needs one small addition: the coffee bean mark on the side.
BF-O12
Chair In the egg rig
The 100 chairs at Christmas dinner.
In 2 of 12: 7 10
From: egg rig world prop: chair (the sit move)
BF-O13
Laptop In the egg rig
What Sally hammers in September.
In 3 of 12: 1 3 8
From: egg rig prop: laptop
BF-O14
Coral Cove Coffee shop set Drawn, waiting on YT's yes
Her shop front with the awning, the coffee cart, a table, the A-board, trees, planters and her teal apron.
In 2 of 12: 5 12
From: scene-coral-cove-opening.js (the cut-out sample)
Already drawn in the cut-out sample scene. No D-id until YT says yes to the sample.
Old look only, M-31
BF-O15
Sending line Needs redrawing
Sally's line over the year: calm, then jagged. The steady sender's calm line inside its band.
In 4 of 12: 1 3 5 11
From: M-31
Old look only, M-31
BF-O16
Staircase Needs redrawing
The climb to November, one step a week. The opposite of the jump.
In 7 of 12: 1 3 4 6 9 10 11
From: M-31
Old look only, M-31
BF-O17
Month wall and month strip Needs redrawing
September to December, filling with envelopes. 31 October still ahead.
In 7 of 12: 1 2 3 4 6 7 11
From: M-31
Not drawn yet
BF-O18
Chart marks New
The 2x and 3x ticks, the 20 percent band, the plan bar, the warm-up bar, the week bracket, the two lanes.
In 8 of 12: 1 3 4 5 6 9 10 11
Small data shapes that go with the line and the staircase. Drawn from the brand system.
Old look only, M-22
BF-O19
Running meter Needs redrawing
Climbs toward the 0.10 percent line when people press spam.
In 4 of 12: 2 3 6 12
From: M-22
Old look only, M-20
BF-O20
Case file with a 2022 tab Needs redrawing
The old webinar spreadsheet, no file name on screen.
In 2 of 12: 2 10
From: M-20
Old look only, M-19
BF-O21
Four badges Needs redrawing
Reputation, authentication, engagement, complaints. Reputation rides with the domain.
In 2 of 12: 4 6
From: M-19
Old look only, M-48
BF-O22
Out of every 100 Needs redrawing
The tally beside the dinner table: 40 of 100.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: M-48
The storyboard waited for the cast to draw people here. In the cut-out look the guests are egg people at the table.
Old look only, M-26
BF-O23
Dot fraction Needs redrawing
Shows the rate rising when the table gets smaller.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: M-26
Old look only, M-13 (the parcel)
BF-O24
Parcel tag reading 421 Needs redrawing
The zoom-in that proves slow down, not blocked.
In 1 of 12: 8
From: M-13 (the parcel)
Drawn, see M-15, redrawn as D-295 in RME-229 batch 1
BF-O25
Envelope row and inbox column Drawn, waiting on YT's yes
A row stops halfway to the desk. An inbox column fills with sale emails.
In 2 of 12: 8 12
From: M-15, redrawn as D-295 in RME-229 batch 1
Not drawn yet
BF-O26
The amber spam flag New Vy could draw
What a reader raises when they press the spam button.
In 4 of 12: 2 3 6 7
Four videos use it. Goes with the new raise-the-flag move.
Not drawn yet
BF-O27
Suppression bar New
One bar across both lists, so one unsubscribe stops every envelope.
In 2 of 12: 2 10
From: next to the suppression list scene D-284
Old look only, app piece btn (feature-anim-engine.js)
BF-O28
The SEND button Needs redrawing
The button on Sally's screen that grows and gets pressed.
In 1 of 12: 1
From: app piece btn (feature-anim-engine.js)
Not drawn yet
BF-O29
Stretch mat New Vy could draw
You stretch before you run. One still object.
In 1 of 12: 4
Not drawn yet
BF-O30
Social post card New
The post that says email is dying. Tiny in front of a million envelopes.
In 1 of 12: 4
Not drawn yet
BF-O31
Clock face New Vy could draw
Black Friday, 10:14. Runs from minutes into hours.
In 1 of 12: 8
Not drawn yet
BF-O32
Long dinner table New Vy could draw
Holds 100 chairs, then shrinks to fit the guests who came.
In 2 of 12: 7 10
Not drawn yet
BF-O33
Raffle ticket and question mark New Vy could draw
What the strangers hold: who are you again?
In 1 of 12: 7
Not drawn yet
BF-O34
Blame arrow New
The amber arrow Sally points at her email tool.
In 1 of 12: 4
Not drawn yet
BF-O35
Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag New Vy could draw
Every email in November wears one. Slaps on, peels off.
In 1 of 12: 12
Not drawn yet
BF-O36
Law-office sign New Vy could draw
The small sign on one door. Two-for-one divorces?
In 1 of 12: 12
Not drawn yet
BF-O37
Calendar square with a pickle New Vy could draw
Sally's coffee sale for a pickle holiday.
In 1 of 12: 12
The storyboard says the pickle looks confused. A face on a pickle breaks the rule that only people are characters, so it needs YT's call.
Not drawn yet
BF-O38
Small teal heart New
On the end card of idea 6. The same heart marks the email word (vocab decision of 3 Oct).
In 1 of 12: 6
Drawn, see bf-end-card.js (D-470), two versions on bf-o39-end-card.html
BF-O39
The Don't be Sally end card Drawn, waiting on YT's yes
Sally crossed through with one teal line. Every video ends on it.
In 12 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
From: bf-end-card.js (D-470), two versions on bf-o39-end-card.html
Drawn in two versions, waiting on YT's pick (4 Oct): A is a cut-out sign with the sticker outline standing in the scene (D-471), B is a flat card in the words layer with no outline (D-472). Same copy and beats in both. Sally's name card is the M-11 piece (D-343).
Not drawn yet
BF-O40
Series mark New
A row of twelve small cards, one per idea. On the series frame and the carousel cover.
In 2 of 12: 5 10
Hung pieces 3 Things on strings from the top of the frame.
BF-H01
Sun on a string Drawn, waiting on YT's yes
Hangs from the top of the frame and sways.
In 1 of 12: 5
From: scene-coral-cove-opening.js
BF-H02
Clouds on strings Drawn, waiting on YT's yes
Two clouds that drop in with a bounce.
In 1 of 12: 5
From: scene-coral-cove-opening.js
Not drawn yet
BF-H03
Autumn leaves on strings New Vy could draw
Then the leaves turn: a few leaves drop in as the paper warms.
In 1 of 12: 1
Places (the scenes) 10 Each place is a floor, a backdrop and its props.
Old look only, office floor and desk
BF-S01
Sally's office In the library
Where she writes, sends and panics.
In 7 of 12: 1 2 3 4 8 10 12
Floor BF-F02 The office, carpet tiles · backdrop BF-B02 Indoor back wall
From: office floor and desk
Drawn, see the cut-out sample scene
BF-S02
Coral Cove Coffee shop front Drawn, waiting on YT's yes
Her shop, the coffee cart, the sun on a string.
In 2 of 12: 5 12
Floor BF-F01 Outdoors, the grid with a road · backdrop BF-B01 Hills
From: the cut-out sample scene
Old look only, D-274 deliverability scene
BF-S03
The road and the gate In the library
Where the provider decides what gets in.
In 8 of 12: 1 3 4 5 6 9 10 11
Floor BF-F01 Outdoors, the grid with a road · backdrop BF-B01 Hills
From: D-274 deliverability scene
Old look only, D-246, D-294
BF-S04
The street of doors In the library
Where her readers live.
In 7 of 12: 2 3 5 6 8 10 12
Floor BF-F01 Outdoors, the grid with a road · backdrop BF-B01 Hills
From: D-246, D-294
Old look only, D-263, D-247
BF-S05
The server room In the library
The mailbox provider's side: the desk, the queue, the try-again sign.
In 3 of 12: 3 8 10
Floor BF-F03 The server room, raised panels · backdrop BF-B02 Indoor back wall
From: D-263, D-247
Old look only, D-262
BF-S06
Sally's house on moving day In the library
Boxes stack up, one is left on the old step.
In 2 of 12: 6 10
Floor BF-F04 Home, wooden boards and a rug · backdrop BF-B02 Indoor back wall
From: D-262
Not drawn yet
BF-S07
Christmas dinner New Vy could draw
The long table with 100 chairs.
In 2 of 12: 7 10
Floor BF-F06 A dining room for Christmas dinner · backdrop BF-B03 Christmas dining room wall
Who: Vy could design
Needs the dining room floor, the wall and the table.
Not drawn yet
BF-S08
The start line New Vy could draw
Sally at the start line, the stretch mat.
In 1 of 12: 4
Floor BF-F05 The start line · backdrop BF-B01 Hills
Who: Vy could design
Needs the start line floor.
Not drawn yet
BF-S09
The chart board New
The year line, the month wall, the staircase and the two lanes, on a big board in Sally's office.
In 9 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 9 10 11
Floor BF-F02 The office, carpet tiles · backdrop BF-B02 Indoor back wall
From: the list board D-255, made big
Proposed. The storyboards draw the charts on plain paper (video1 look). In the cut-out world they need somewhere to stand.
Old look only, D-262, D-295
BF-S10
A reader's inbox at home In the library
The inbox column full of sale emails.
In 1 of 12: 12
Floor BF-F04 Home, wooden boards and a rug · backdrop BF-B02 Indoor back wall
From: D-262, D-295
Floors 6 The floor changes per scene and is always edgeless.
BF-F01
Outdoors, the grid with a road In the library
The street, the road to the door, the shop front.
In 11 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 8 9 10 11 12
From: D-259
BF-F02
The office, carpet tiles In the library
Sally's office.
In 11 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 8 9 10 11 12
From: D-261
BF-F03
The server room, raised panels In the library
The provider's side, where the mail server desk stands.
In 3 of 12: 3 8 10
From: D-263
BF-F04
Home, wooden boards and a rug In the library
Sally's house on moving day, a reader at home.
In 3 of 12: 6 10 12
From: D-262
Not drawn yet
BF-F05
The start line New Vy could draw
A running track with a start line, for idea 4.
In 1 of 12: 4
Who: Vy could design
Until it exists the outdoor floor stands in.
Not drawn yet
BF-F06
A dining room for Christmas dinner New Vy could draw
Where the long table stands in idea 7.
In 2 of 12: 7 10
Who: Vy could design
Until it exists the home floor D-262 stands in.
Backdrops 3 The flat far wall or hills behind a place.
BF-B01
Hills In the library
The far backdrop outdoors.
In 11 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 8 9 10 11 12
From: D-257
BF-B02
Indoor back wall In the library
The far wall indoors.
In 11 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 8 9 10 11 12
From: D-258
Not drawn yet
BF-B03
Christmas dining room wall New Vy could draw
A window and a garland behind the dinner table.
In 2 of 12: 7 10
Who: Vy could design
Until it exists the indoor wall D-258 stands in.
Movements: people 19 Moves from the egg rig.
BF-R01
Walk In the egg rig
Every person walks in, in depth. People never fold in.
In 5 of 12: 2 4 5 6 7
From: walk
Counted only where a storyboard line has someone arrive, leave or set off. In practice every person walks in.
BF-R02
Stand and turn In the egg rig
Hold still, turn to face us.
In 1 of 12: 4
From: stand, turn
BF-R03
Typing at the laptop In the egg rig
Sally hammering the keyboard, sending again and again.
In 4 of 12: 1 3 4 8
From: computer, laptop
BF-R04
Point In the egg rig
Press the big SEND button, point the blame arrow.
In 2 of 12: 1 4
From: point
BF-R05
Give In the egg rig
Hand over an envelope or an invite.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: give
BF-R06
Wave and say hi In the egg rig
Meet Sally.
In 2 of 12: 1 5
From: wave, sayhi
BF-R07
Stressed In the egg rig
Panic season, the campaign looks stuck.
In 2 of 12: 6 8
From: stressed
BF-R08
Shrug In the egg rig
Surprised the party is a bust.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: shrug
BF-R09
Think In the egg rig
Next year, Sally checks the guest list first.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: think
BF-R10
Sit down and stay seated In the egg rig
Guests sit at the dinner table.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: sit, seated
BF-R11
Eat In the egg rig
Christmas dinner.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: eat
BF-R12
Celebrate In the egg rig
Smaller table, fuller room.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: celebrate, hurray
BF-R13
Nod and shake the head In the egg rig
The quiet friends answer the one invite.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: nod, shake
BF-R14
Jump In the egg rig
Sally takes the lift: one jump instead of the stairs.
In 1 of 12: 9
From: jump
BF-R15
Run In the egg rig
Off the start line.
In 1 of 12: 4
From: chase
BF-R16
Moods In the egg rig
Cross, surprised, worried, happy, on any move.
In 4 of 12: 1 2 3 4
From: annoyed, surprised, worried, happy
Not drawn yet
BF-R17
Stretch New
The warm-up on the mat.
In 1 of 12: 4
Not drawn yet
BF-R18
Raise the spam flag New
A reader lifts the amber flag.
In 3 of 12: 2 3 7
From: built from point with a flag in the hand
Not drawn yet
BF-R19
Carry a box New
Walk with a box held in both arms, on moving day.
In 1 of 12: 6
From: give and take hold an item, walking with one is new
Movements: things, the stage and the camera 16 How the pieces move.
Old look only, cutout-stage.js (style bible rule 2)
BF-K01
Pop-up fold in, fold flat to change scene In the egg rig
The set folds up from the floor and folds flat behind the last person.
In 5 of 12: 1 2 4 5 7
From: cutout-stage.js (style bible rule 2)
Old look only, cutout-stage.js (style bible rule 5)
BF-K02
Hung pieces drop in and sway In the egg rig
Sun, clouds, leaves on strings.
In 2 of 12: 1 5
From: cutout-stage.js (style bible rule 5)
Old look only, visual dictionary scenes D-271, D-275
BF-K03
Envelope flies, lands, bounces back In the library
One envelope to one reader, or back to Sally.
In 8 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
From: visual dictionary scenes D-271, D-275
Not drawn yet
BF-K04
Envelopes stack and pile up New
1, then 2, then 4 a week. Three copies of the same sale.
In 9 of 12: 1 2 3 4 6 7 8 11 12
Not drawn yet
BF-K05
Envelopes queue and drain at the desk New
A neat queue in front of the desk that keeps moving.
In 1 of 12: 8
Not drawn yet
BF-K06
The gate narrows and holds the extra New
Extra envelopes wait behind it.
In 4 of 12: 1 5 9 11
From: the gate D-245 has a pass state, narrowing is new
Old look only, spam filter scene D-281, sorting arm D-252
BF-K07
The stream splits into the junk tray In the library
Part of the mail drops into junk.
In 3 of 12: 3 4 6
From: spam filter scene D-281, sorting arm D-252
Old look only, M-25, redrawn as D-297 in RME-229 batch 1, the pour and drop are new
BF-K08
Dots change colour, pour in, drop out Needs redrawing
Teal to grey, a list pours in, dead addresses drop out.
In 3 of 12: 2 3 6
From: M-25, redrawn as D-297 in RME-229 batch 1, the pour and drop are new
Old look only, door D-246, its shut state
BF-K09
A door shuts behind someone In the library
The one who left steps out and the door closes.
In 2 of 12: 2 7
From: door D-246, its shut state
Not drawn yet
BF-K10
Chairs change colour and fold away New
Then the table shrinks to fit the guests.
In 1 of 12: 7
From: uses the pop-up fold
Not drawn yet
BF-K11
A sticker slaps on, then peels off New
On envelopes, on the law-office door, on the pickle.
In 1 of 12: 12
Old look only, M-31, M-22
BF-K12
Charts draw and climb Needs redrawing
The line draws across the year, the staircase climbs, the meter rises and eases.
In 9 of 12: 1 2 3 4 5 6 9 11 12
From: M-31, M-22
Old look only, M-45, the cut-out camera push
BF-K13
Camera zooms in to a detail In the egg rig
Prove one thing: the 2022 tab, the 421 tag, the jump.
In 6 of 12: 1 2 3 8 9 12
From: M-45, the cut-out camera push
Old look only, M-44
BF-K14
Camera zooms out to show scale In the egg rig
A million envelopes, the long empty table.
In 2 of 12: 4 7
From: M-44
Not drawn yet
BF-K15
Rewind New
Back to 10:20. Back to 100 outlined chairs.
In 2 of 12: 7 8
Not drawn yet
BF-K16
The season tint warms New
The paper warms to amber from week 37.
In 1 of 12: 1
Things you named (Christmas hats, shopping bags, cars, lambs, clogs) and a few the stories suggest. None of the twelve storyboards
uses them yet, so they are not in the counts above. Say which to keep and where they go.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y01
Christmas hat New Vy could draw
A Santa hat for the egg people.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
YT named it. The egg hat list has a cap, beanie, beret, bucket, sunhat, headband and headphones, no Christmas hat yet.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y02
Shopping bags New Vy could draw
Carried on Black Friday.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
YT named them. A new hand prop next to the cup and the box.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y03
Cars New Vy could draw
On the outdoor road. A moving van would suit idea 6.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
YT named them. The outdoor floor already has a road for them.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y04
Lambs New Vy could draw
A seasonal animal.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
YT named them. Only people are characters in this style, so an animal needs YT's call first.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y05
Clogs New Vy could draw
Shoes for the egg people.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
YT named them. The egg wear list has no shoes yet.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y06
Snowflakes and a Christmas star on strings New Vy could draw
For the December scenes in ideas 6 and 7.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
Suggested by the story, not named on any storyboard line.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y07
The lawyer behind the law-office door New Vy could draw
Idea 12, two-for-one divorces.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
The storyboard shows only the door. A person would land the joke harder.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y08
Real stairs and a real lift New Vy could draw
Idea 9 drawn literally: one sender on the stairs, Sally in the lift.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
The storyboard draws two chart lanes. This would be a new scene to draw.
Not drawn yet
BF-Y09
A Black Friday shopping street New Vy could draw
Shop fronts all wearing sale stickers, for idea 12.
No storyboard uses it yet
Who: Vy could design
Suggested by idea 12, not on its storyboard.
Video by video
Each idea, scene by scene: the one sentence on screen, the place, and every element it uses. Tap an element to jump to its card.
Idea 1: Black Friday in September 11 scenes · 1 people · 11 pieces still to draw Idea 2: Panic season: the 2022 webinar spreadsheet 14 scenes · 6 people · 11 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 This is Sally's webinar spreadsheet. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender Case file with a 2022 tab Office desk with a screen Pop-up fold in, fold flat to change scene Walk 2 It is from 2022. Sally's office Case file with a 2022 tab Camera zooms in to a detail 3 Those people signed up to watch one webinar. Sally's office Case file with a 2022 tab A reader as a dot Crowd extras 4 In September, Sally uploads all of them. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender A reader as a dot List board Dots change colour, pour in, drop out 5 Then she emails them. The street of doors Envelope A reader as a dot Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 6 And again, every week until December. The chart board Month wall and month strip Envelope Envelopes stack and pile up 7 Three years is a long time to remember one webinar. The street of doors A reader as a dot The quiet one Dots change colour, pour in, drop out 8 People who forget signing up press the spam button. The street of doors The one who forgot and pressed spam The amber spam flag Raise the spam flag Running meter Charts draw and climb 9 Some unsubscribe instead. The street of doors The one who left Reader's door and the street of doors Walk A door shuts behind someone 10 Next week, Sally's other list emails them anyway. The street of doors List board Envelope Reader's door and the street of doors The one who left Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 11 Now they are not confused, they are cross. The street of doors The one who left The amber spam flag Moods 12 One unsubscribe should close every door. The street of doors Suppression bar List board Envelope 13 Email the people who expect to hear from you. The street of doors The loyal subscriber A reader as a dot Envelope Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 14 Don't be Sally. End card The Don't be Sally end card Sally Send, the sender
Idea 3: It's Microsoft's fault 15 scenes · 4 people · 12 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 In September, Sally mentions Black Friday once. The chart board Month wall and month strip Envelope 2 In October, she mentions it in every email. The chart board Month wall and month strip Envelope Envelopes stack and pile up 3 In November, she mentions it every day. The chart board Month wall and month strip 4 Her readers start to drift off. The street of doors A reader as a dot The quiet one Dots change colour, pour in, drop out 5 A few press the spam button. The street of doors The one who forgot and pressed spam The amber spam flag Raise the spam flag Running meter Charts draw and climb 6 Her mail starts landing in junk. The road and the gate The gate The junk tray Envelope The stream splits into the junk tray 7 So Sally writes to Microsoft, in capitals. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender Laptop Typing at the laptop Moods Envelope Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 8 It lands on top of a tall pile. The server room The mail server desk Envelope Envelopes stack and pile up 9 The filter is not cross with Sally. The server room The mail server desk Sending line 10 It is reading the change in her rhythm. The server room Sending line Camera zooms in to a detail 11 The way back is gentle. The chart board Month wall and month strip Charts draw and climb 12 Write to the people who still open, then add a little each week. The street of doors The loyal subscriber Envelope Staircase Charts draw and climb 13 Give it a few weeks. The chart board Running meter Chart marks Charts draw and climb 14 Next year, start the climb a few weeks early. The chart board Staircase Chart marks 15 Don't be Sally. End card The Don't be Sally end card Sally Send, the sender
Idea 4: You stretch before you run 13 scenes · 4 people · 12 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 You stretch before you run. The start line Stretch mat Pop-up fold in, fold flat to change scene 2 Sally did not stretch. The start line Sally Send, the sender Stretch mat Walk Stand and turn 3 She sent a million emails on Black Friday. The start line Sally Send, the sender Envelope Envelopes stack and pile up Camera zooms out to show scale 4 A lot of them missed the inbox. The road and the gate Envelope The junk tray The stream splits into the junk tray 5 Sally blamed her email marketing tool. The road and the gate The gate Blame arrow Sally Send, the sender Point Moods 6 The tool only carries the mail. The road and the gate Envelope The gate Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 7 The mailbox provider decides where it lands. The road and the gate The mail server desk Four badges Reader's door and the street of doors The junk tray 8 Then Sally posted that email is dying. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender Social post card Typing at the laptop 9 She had just sent a million of them to make money. Sally's office Social post card Envelope Camera zooms out to show scale 10 Email is fine, it just needs a warm-up. The start line Sally Send, the sender Stretch mat Stretch 11 Climb over two to four weeks before the big day. The chart board Staircase Month wall and month strip Chart marks Charts draw and climb 12 Your keenest readers go first. The road and the gate The loyal subscriber The quiet one Crowd extras Walk Run 13 Don't be Sally. End card The Don't be Sally end card Sally Send, the sender
Idea 5: Don't be Sally (the series frame) 9 scenes · 3 people · 7 pieces still to draw Idea 6: Now is not the time to migrate 15 scenes · 6 people · 13 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 Sally's readers are fed up. The street of doors A reader as a dot The quiet one The one who forgot and pressed spam The amber spam flag 2 Her emails start landing in junk. The road and the gate The gate The junk tray The stream splits into the junk tray 3 So Sally decides to move house. Sally's house on moving day Sally Send, the sender Coffee subscription box Carry a box Stressed Envelopes stack and pile up 4 Two weeks before Christmas. The chart board Month wall and month strip 5 A safe move takes four to six weeks. The chart board Month wall and month strip Chart marks Charts draw and climb 6 Christmas lands in the middle of it. The chart board Month wall and month strip Chart marks 7 The bad reputation moves with her. Sally's house on moving day Sally Send, the sender Four badges Walk 8 The unsubscribes stay on the old doorstep. Sally's house on moving day Coffee subscription box Reader's door and the street of doors The one who left 9 So the new tool emails people who said stop. The street of doors Envelope Reader's door and the street of doors Running meter The one who left Charts draw and climb 10 Stay put and fix the list instead. Sally's house on moving day Sally Send, the sender Coffee subscription box Carry a box 11 Clean it. The street of doors A reader as a dot The one who moved on Dots change colour, pour in, drop out 12 Shrink it to the people who want your email. The street of doors A reader as a dot The loyal subscriber Dots change colour, pour in, drop out 13 Send them something good. The street of doors Envelope The loyal subscriber Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 14 Then add a little more each week. The chart board Staircase Charts draw and climb 15 That's all the spam filters really want for Christmas. End card The Don't be Sally end card Small teal heart Sally Send, the sender
Idea 7: The empty chairs at Christmas dinner 15 scenes · 7 people · 13 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 Sally invites 100 people to Christmas dinner. Christmas dinner Sally Send, the sender Long dinner table Chair Out of every 100 Crowd extras Pop-up fold in, fold flat to change scene 2 20 are friends she has not called in years. Christmas dinner The quiet one Chair Chairs change colour and fold away 3 10 are people she met once and added anyway. Christmas dinner The stranger from the raffle Raffle ticket and question mark Chair Chairs change colour and fold away 4 10 invites go to old addresses nobody reads. Christmas dinner The one who moved on Envelope Chair Envelope flies, lands, bounces back 5 10 do not remember her at all. Christmas dinner The one who forgot and pressed spam The amber spam flag Raise the spam flag 6 She sends so many reminders that 10 more give up. Christmas dinner The one who left Envelope Reader's door and the street of doors Walk Envelopes stack and pile up A door shuts behind someone 7 40 people come to dinner. Christmas dinner Out of every 100 Long dinner table Chair 8 Sally is surprised the party is a bust. Christmas dinner Sally Send, the sender Long dinner table Shrug Camera zooms out to show scale 9 Next year, Sally checks the guest list first. Christmas dinner Long dinner table Chair Think Sally Send, the sender Rewind 10 She asks the quiet friends once if they still want to come. Christmas dinner Sally Send, the sender The quiet one Envelope Give Nod and shake the head 11 The ones who stay silent get no more invites. Christmas dinner The quiet one Chair Chairs change colour and fold away 12 She fixes the old addresses and leaves out the strangers. Christmas dinner The one who moved on The stranger from the raffle Chair Chairs change colour and fold away 13 She sends one good invite, not nine. Christmas dinner Sally Send, the sender Envelope Give 14 Smaller table, fuller room. Christmas dinner Long dinner table Crowd extras Dot fraction Sit down and stay seated Eat Celebrate Chairs change colour and fold away 15 Do it before the season starts. End card The Don't be Sally end card Sally Send, the sender Month wall and month strip
Idea 8: It's not stuck, it's in the queue 11 scenes · 2 people · 5 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 Black Friday, 10:14. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender Clock face 2 Sally's campaign looks stuck. The server room Envelope row and inbox column The mail server desk 3 It is not stuck. The server room Sign on a stand The mail server desk 4 Busy servers ask mail to wait and try again. The server room Envelope The mail server desk Envelopes queue and drain at the desk 5 A 421 means slow down, not blocked. The server room Parcel tag reading 421 Envelopes queue and drain at the desk Camera zooms in to a detail 6 It still arrives, just slower. The server room Clock face Envelopes queue and drain at the desk 7 At 10:20, Sally sends it again. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender Laptop Envelope row and inbox column Typing at the laptop Stressed Envelopes stack and pile up Rewind 8 At 10:31, again. Sally's office Sally Send, the sender Laptop Typing at the laptop Stressed Envelopes stack and pile up 9 Her best customers get three copies of the same sale. The street of doors The loyal subscriber Envelope Coffee subscription box Envelope flies, lands, bounces back Envelopes stack and pile up 10 One send, then patience. The server room The mail server desk Envelopes queue and drain at the desk 11 Don't be Sally. End card The Don't be Sally end card Sally Send, the sender
Idea 9: Take the stairs, not the lift 9 scenes · 2 people · 6 pieces still to draw Idea 10: The Sally checklist (carousel) 10 slides · 3 people · 8 pieces still to draw Idea 11: Consistency: all year nothing, then ALL THE EMAILS 13 scenes · 1 people · 8 pieces still to draw Idea 12: Everyone is tired of promo email 13 scenes · 3 people · 7 pieces still to draw # On screen Place Elements 1 In November, every inbox turns into one long sale. A reader's inbox at home Envelope row and inbox column Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag Envelope 2 Every email says best deal of the year. A reader's inbox at home Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag Camera zooms in to a detail 3 It feels like the price went up first. A reader's inbox at home Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag 4 And not every business needs a Black Friday. The street of doors Reader's door and the street of doors Law-office sign 5 If you're a lawyer, what are you going to promote? The street of doors Law-office sign Camera zooms in to a detail 6 Two-for-one divorces? The street of doors Law-office sign Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag A sticker slaps on, then peels off 7 Sally sells coffee. Coral Cove Coffee shop front Sally Send, the sender Coffee cup Coral Cove Coffee shop set 8 Last spring she ran a coffee sale for a pickle holiday. Sally's office Calendar square with a pickle Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag A sticker slaps on, then peels off 9 More of what people are tired of costs you. A reader's inbox at home Running meter Envelope row and inbox column Charts draw and climb Envelopes stack and pile up 10 If a sale is new for you, test it on a small group first. The street of doors A reader as a dot Envelope Crowd extras 11 If it does not fit your business, skip it. The street of doors Sale sticker, discount sticker and price tag Law-office sign Calendar square with a pickle A sticker slaps on, then peels off 12 Send something people want to open. A reader's inbox at home Envelope The loyal subscriber 13 Don't be Sally. End card The Don't be Sally end card Sally Send, the sender
Calls only you can make
The end card (BF-O39): a piece with the sticker outline, or the words layer without one? The chart scenes (BF-S09): on a big board in Sally's office, as proposed, or on plain paper like video1? The pickle (BF-O37): may it have a face, or does it stay a plain object? YT's extra items (Christmas hat, shopping bags, cars, lambs, clogs): which to keep, and where they go.